SIX HAIKU POEMS – Michael Brownstein

Posted: February 18, 2013 in Fiction, Haiku, Poetry
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WATER DRAWINGS IN A SERIES OF LINKED MAYBE HAIKU
water fills me with you
mist and drizzle with sunlight
Christmas lights in prisms
listen to the water fall
the edge a pool of glimmer
smooth skinned and happy
when I drink this water
I wear your hand in my glove
your impression on my love
God created life out of water
good from the earth
you because he knew of me
water silvers the skyline
the city and town
the branch you sit upon
because of you
even water
is more beautiful
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Comments
  1. I am a BIG fan of the Haiku BUT I have to take issue with the above Haikus…while beautiful they are not following the 5-7-5 syllable format at all so they would not be considered Haiku…it wouldn’t take much to change them up I’m thinking to come in line with the format…..just saying…don’t hate the messenger…:)

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